inflate123@airytales.net
It's the same old story: Boy meets girl, girl visits boy in his chem lab, girl swipes experimental project that causes her to inflate in front of boy's eyes...it's a Christmas miracle!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.33
- BE: 3.67
- Characters: 4.33
- Technical: 3.67
ApesMa
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Fun, with likeable characters. Thanks!
Lburns
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Good story as expected from you. I'd have liked it to be a bit longer but it works. :)
Tsokei
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Awesome story, I thought the size and delivery was nearly perfect. I really enjoyed the characters and I think the only thing that could be better is more detailed description of the growth/more growth spurts. Thanks for posting!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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