The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Joshua Trebuchet
Ms. Titanic
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Foo Man
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4

Given that her transformation was entirely under her control, and she disliked having to buy new clothes due to having ripped the old, it seems highly out of character for our heroine to not undress before transforming. I also find it surprising that a super heroine would be so gullible - admittedly, the story did not explicitly indicate that her intelligence went up with her transformation...

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