The Overflowing Bra

There wasn't much emotion between the characters, as it's been said, but the narrator's emotions were pretty clear, and his reactions totally valid. I liked the writing style for the most part, but for a BE vignette, the actual BE part was a bit lacking, but the bra fitting part was a nice touch. You may have overdone it with the descriptions in the beginning, but it's allright. 

English not is first language?

I didn't feel any chemistry between the characters, possibly because there was just not enough story going on.  Maybe you could have spent some time developing the girl(and not in THAT way), like how long has she been planning this, what triggered her desire to become busty, etc.  As for the guy, what does he want?  Did he even want her to be busty?  It doesn't really seem that way...What about the couple together?  What was their relationship like?  The BE was good, but didn't even seem really necessary, wanted, or surprising.  

Yup. This is a Vignette: Short and to the point. No time for character development in this piece, but there isn't any room for it. The downside is that the BE is a bit mellow. Decently described, but the emotion is lacking. Pete is quite accurate in his chemistry comment; due to size constraints, a story this size should have more than normal emotional content. The technical quality is excellent. I have to work to pick out errors and they are the sort that can go either way--stylistic issues and the like. Overall, while A Vignette is a bit boring, I have to like it for it's workmanship.

Not enough story or Discription on the BE