The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Andy Maynard
Unknown
Chain of Command
A detested boss and a loyal employee find a magic lamp, but the employee gets to go first with his wishes...
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Will It Work
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This is a very good, well written story, with classic fairy tale elements.

If someone is looking for a stroke fic, they will not find it here.

Much of the story is spent on the set up, it would be interesting to see what happens to Tasha after the marriage.

cavaleiro121
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

good

Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

A good story with good characters and great attention to detail/background story. It would be interesting to see not so much a sequel but more work based around this ideas of this story from the author.

xxxecil
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

A clever tale, written with ingenuity. It needed a few more B.E. descriptions, but immensely enjoyable.

Fred
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Very Good

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