An extremely inhibited high school girl stumbles across a magic remote control and quickly finds herself wondering why her body is tingling and her bra won't fit.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 3.50
- Technical: 4.00
Ryver
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Just as good this time as it was the first time I read it on another website!
cmdr_mark
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
I'd like a lil back story to it, like what the cheerleader had done as pranks, but otherwise enjoyable.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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