Heather finds herself taking a new drug to help heal her broken hand. Side effects? Just a few.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.88
- BE: 3.63
- Characters: 3.38
- Technical: 3.88
one_eyed_jack
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
What can I say, Downing Street is pretty much my favorite BE Author, bar none..
DarkHeart
Overall= 1, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
(Possible spoiler alert)
I'm not into stories where women are turned into dumb bimbos, otherwise the story was well written, just in the future give some sort of indication of what the mental changes are just so that if people aren't into that kind of transformation, we won't make the mistake of reading it.
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very well written, very arousing. The only reason I took a point off for BE is that it happens in the background, so to speak; I don't mind this, but others might.
Slightly Confused
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
Decent story. Disturbing that the woman was completely changed, although arousing in ways. The characters were stereotypes and not so well done.
I have read this story before, though. I just don't know where. Is this a rewrite and repost to this site under a different name or is this posted on some other website?
Benji Dude
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Very well written, perfectly paced, strangly the rate of the main characters transformations didn't seem to quick as can often be the case with stories of this kind, no real idea of how large the main characters got, or any sensations they felt (i.e. lacking in discription) but that doesn't really detract from the story that much. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
didentsuck
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
AR
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
For those who are interested, Downing Street is a regular contributor to the Mind Control Archive and is considered to be a major author over there with a large following. He has been writing for about 8 years and it was a pleasant surprise to find him over in this group.
He is know for his slow development of the changes along with an emphasis on the changes in the style of clothes that the character wears as she changes. He has written other BE stories which are posted in the MC Archive
It is his gradual changes along with his detailed description of the change that I find erotic. I see that this is part one of two and I look forward to the second part. I highly recommend this author to anyone who read erotic fiction and I hope that he does more stories in the BE area. Several of his stories are considered classics and i agree fully.
Jonas
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
This is one of my favorite stories.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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