Amanda Zonn uses super-science to change her plain body into that of a ravashing goddess. But what happens when she turns the dial too far?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 2.90
- BE: 2.30
- Characters: 2.40
- Technical: 3.50
who
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Stretch
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This story was originally called Amyzon. It's an excellent story but it's a bit upsetting that the real author isn't mentioned.
Squishy
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 2
Personally, I don't think this story belongs in THIS arhive. Even though it does CONTAIN some BE, there's just not enough of it. About 99% of this story is about a violent scyscraper-sized woman. To me, that kind of thing belongs in a GIANTESS story archive somewhere. Yes, there are other stories in this archive involving giant women / small men, those stories also have a substantial amount of breast growth / breast play related stuff. This one does not.
I gave this a 2 for Overall because I enjoyed the beginning parts of the initial growth and the beginning of the re-growth in the van. But other than that, I really couldn't see any reason to finish the story.
A 2 in BE because only because there actually WAS BE, even if only a little. Don't use cup sizes to describe growth. They generally reveal nothing.
The main / only character had little emotion, and no personality. So that gets a 1.
Your sentence structure was fine for the most part. My main quibble is with the format. I have no problem with it being a doc file, though many people might. But your choice of font / size / boldness was terrible. It reminded me of one of those large-type books that old people buy, and it was annoying to try to read. Normal 12 point Times New Roman is fine. Use THAT.
In short, while this may be a fine for a giantess story archive, it just doesn't fit here. Don't be discouraged though. You may find much better feedback elsewhere. I just personally didn't like it.
Merci et adieu.
some guy
Overall= 3, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
Lord, I bet there are people reading this now who weren't ALIVE when that story first showed up on USENET. And the numerous Bra Code Violations hurt my eyes to read as much now as then.
AgreeWithSquishy
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 4
This is the wrong site for mass murder fantasies.
brianm
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is one of my favourite stories. Scott is a really great GTS writer. But as has been mentioned this is more of a GTS story than a BE one.
jack
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
what's so erotic about death? physical domination - to a certain point - maybe, but not death. personally i think that anybody who gets turned on by killing or being killed should be put away.
Mr. Jones
Overall= 1, BE= 3, Characters= 1, Technical= 4
Sick. The gruesome, graphic death of thousands of innocents for an orgasm? Then when the character becomes sane again she still, willingly returns to such a state. If i were to meet the writer of this story i would have a few choice words to let loose.
This story does not belong here, or anywhere for that matter. Just appaled, i was hoping for a hero, but apparently, the character was the hero????
boobmonkey
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
As is mentioned before, not sure this belongs in this archive. I don't like the stomping underfoot, but i know some poeple do. That said, the growth is fantastic, if you have any GTS fantasies at all, give this a read.
Veryfree
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 3
Sicker than a Larson "The Far Side" cartoon. Definitely poor taste.
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