The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Sormin
White Art
A woman has a dream about being in a grey place where her breasts are used as a canvas for alien art.
Average Scores:
 Anon
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 3 
Good on the fetish.  Writing style is basic, but stick with it.  Practice brings improvement.  Thank you, I enjoyed it.
 Stretch
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4 
It's a very enjoyable story and certainly creative. 
 PhilcoTV
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
Inventive idea, pretty well explained.  Some clumsiness in word choice and sentence structure.  
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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