story i found a while ago, unfinished but good
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.71
- BE: 4.71
- Characters: 4.71
- Technical: 3.86
NewGuy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
The best BE story I've ever read. Should be a real book. Loved it, even the cliffhanger just left me wanting more, and thats always a sing of a good story!
somejon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
the story doesn't end with a cliffhanger, so it is still fun to read. but sormin, finish it please.
equinox13
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
definitely now in my top 5 favorite stories of all time. and that's across all genres and writing styles. it definitely needs to get finished. just by reading it i could feel that lots of care was put into every single detail and the characters and story took on a level of realism i'm hard pressed to find in modern day writers.
Legacyguy
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
A fairly great story. I wish there was a completion of this out on the internet somewhere. I do enjoy stories involving magic and such.
Vaelon
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
Please sir, can I have some more? No Really! I would love to see this story finnished.
Eggman
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I too would like to see the conclusion of this one. My ONLY complaint was that during the events of chapters 9-11, I got concerned that the story was getting WAY too serious. Also, the rhyming magic itself seemed to take a big backseat after the first couple chapters - though it came back well enough later.
axeman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
wonderfully creative,the sex change was discomforting at first but i grew to accept it
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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