This is AkioKid's story about Emi, a young girl who's destined to fight evil while dealing with an ever-growing bustline. Included with the story are several pieces of art that Akio did to go along with the story.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.60
- BE: 3.60
- Characters: 3.60
- Technical: 3.00
Brit
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 1
Ugh, the formatting is too horrible. Could not read any of it.
Blamandude
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
eternity42
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
My very first B.E. story EVER. It helps if you have a very vivid imagination!
Bobo
Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
It's like reading a movie script and not a story.
Fake_Name
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
It is rather klunkily written. However, i suspect it's more due to a bad translation, or a less than perfect controll of english than anything else.
not the first script type story on TOB.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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