Promising all the excitement and adventure that reading a log file can provide.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.60
- BE: 3.40
- Characters: 3.20
- Technical: 4.20
tsokei
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
great stuff, I enjoyed it as much as any single-scene story
IceOwl
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 3
Neat idea, but it lacks any kind of plot or buildup.. It seems more like a story element than a thing that should stand alone as a story.
Wren
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
oxomox
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
IceOwl: Yeah, as I mentioned, it's for people who enjoy reading lo files, i.e. geeks like me.
Wren: http://www.overflowingforum.com/viewtopic.php?p=3116#3116
L I C
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 5
It was very good. I thought that showing how the girl was freaking out at one point by mashing the keyboard was funny. Good job.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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