Doesn't quite live up to the claim of the title, but in a funny way.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.12
- BE: 3.29
- Characters: 3.35
- Technical: 4.29
eyeguy
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I'm not sure what to call this spoof? Parody? Snarkfest? Whatever, it's great! I've read waaaaaay too many stories that were just as bad as this but were trying to be serious.
RandomX
Overall= 5, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 5
"I was simply trying to save the moment for not only the right audience, but for the day when Walmart had a half-price sale on both hand lotion and Kleenex."
Sam, I hope someday you return and write again. Or if you have work elsewhere, that I find it.
Dreginy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
LMFAO that was fucking hilarious!!
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This story is a great spoof. Good job.
Darkheart
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Machiavelli
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I got a few much needed laughs out of that one.
deux_anges
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Absolute genius! Had me laughing out loud.
Pringlesman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
MrAgreedUpon
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
I agree, worst BE story ever, not much BE, horrible writing, need I continue?
Doobz
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 2
Horrible, just horrible. Less of a gag than an insult to a large number of writers and fans of this fetish. Funny, but not enough to redeem it.
Codfish
Overall= 4, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 5
Due to the nature of this story the author should be proud that he got 1 on BE description and Characters. I believe that was the point. Certainly it was a technically well written spoof of the genre. Don't expect to read this and actually care about the BE. I personally feel that it is excellent that we have a so large and active community that a parody like this can be written. It did have me laughing out loud at points.
0000
Overall= 4, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 4
Excellent. True. Is the worst! So I don't like it. :))
brit
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
blerg
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
andrat2000
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I have to admit the idea is fantastic. Because there were much worser BE und character descriptions in other stories uploaded here, I have to give 5 points to each of the categories. But my main critique that I have to the most stories posted here is about the length.
This story was way too short. That's why overall enjoyment is only a 4!
Some Dude
Overall= 5, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 5
Worthy of every piece of acclaim, as well as every bit of consternation, that has been given to it.
In the end, I just thought it was damn funny. *grin*
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Hilarious! An excellent parody of the average BE story, written in a manner that is almost Simpsons-like in its highbrow view of a lowbrow subject.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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