A young boy discovers his sexuality from the new kid at school, with unusual and fertile consequences!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 2.17
- BE: 2.00
- Characters: 2.17
- Technical: 3.17
MrHHH
Overall= 1, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
A guy gets pregnant, multiple times....YEECHHHH.
jat470
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 4
You have a straightfoward, easy to read writing style and I look foward to seeing other stories that DON'T involve gay erotica.
thedude
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Don
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Nothing good here. It's got holes I could push a small moon through. Rewrite and overhaul. The doctor is no doctor. Even for a fantasy story, this one is completely unfeasable. Take it down.
WhatsTheProblem
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
I admit this story is a tad off the "Normal" fair here but with transformations and gender switchs,etc. I don't think the should be removed. Personally I kinda liked the fat,fucked, and happy fantasy
Bier
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Great Work, maybe you schould post it over at fictionmania.com
But I like your style and hope for some new stuff in the (near) future!
CU
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