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Judy Wall tries an experimental breast enhancement procedure. Which was working well until she met Bud, who tries one of his home-made breast growth procedures.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.67
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 4.75
- Technical: 4.67
Random
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
There definitely has to be a sequel - it'd soon become the most popular story on here!
To whom it may concern
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Earth to veryfree... Its the y2k bug kicking in, it was new year 2000 in the story... I just assumed he didn't fully mention why when the ending happened because he though us smarties could infer it. Anyways that was a great read and Steve you are a fantastic writer.
Texxas Twister
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A very excellent story and well written. Plenty of graphic details laid out for a great understandable story. My hats off to Mr. Steve
Palmer. As always his writting style is by far a great ascesst to the
breast enlargement community.....
nobody
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
What a great story, although I was a little bit rolling my eyes at the many multifarious mysterious means of breast enlargement employed in the story. If you're going to have more than one superscientific breast enlarger, go whole hog and have ten, and make the story utterly gonzo. 10 or 1. Your choice.
Other than that, a great tale!
DarkHeart
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
What a great story and I loved the twist at the end. :)
bikeymoy
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I can't tell you enough how much I enjoyed that! The multiples, TG's, and Amazons that are so popular here turn me off. I can't even read them. But yours... Finally, a real meat and potatos big tit story!
IMO, great grammar, too. I really appreciate a great story that reads well. Thank you!
redog
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Excellent story...wonder when they'll get the power back!
deux_anges
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Excellent work all round (pun intended!). I alwyas liked that the BE subject was a willing one.
Benji Dude
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
One great story, I shall add it to my collection. This story has all the signs of a writer who gave it loads of love and attention, we can all learn from this writer.
Ryver
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I absolutely love this story.
n
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Veryfree
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 2
I like the story, but give it low marks because of the indeterminate ending.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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