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A scene involving a girl whose breasts grow in the middle of a crowded shopping mall.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.88
- BE: 3.88
- Characters: 3.13
- Technical: 4.25
Daunte
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Nice short story. Your work is excellent as usual, though I do prefer a longer tale with more character development. And no, I'm not talking about the BE.
DarkHeart
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
As Daunte said, it was well written (if only more writers showed your attention to detail), yet it seemed a bit lacking.
lord fuzz
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Very nice, well written. Please keep writing
Thanks for this one.
Kanodin
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
I'm left with a sense of dissappointment at the end of the story, yet certain aspect of this act blow me away. I guess mysteries are good, but please add the component of recognition so that the reader doesn't feel left out.
Rudeypunk
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
A fun little story. Good description of the BE and the results. Keep up the good work.
DD_Redshoes
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Quite a cute and enjoyable read thankyou.
The mind just wonders why the BE just started for no apparent reason.
Guess she was just a late bloomer I guess LOL
DD_Redshoes
Tarot
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
Nicely affecting. I particularly enjoyed the uncontrolled pleasure, even when she was scared of it. Too short, not well developed really, but I liked the mystery even to the end.
PhilcoTV
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Pretty good for a sketch -- not quite complete enough, though.
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