A photographer is hired to take pictures of a woman as she grows larger and larger boobs
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.75
- BE: 3.50
- Characters: 3.50
- Technical: 3.50
muse_xy
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
oxomox
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
I have a pile of stories I've written for myself which I've never published. I only put 10 up today. They aren't perfect but I welcome feedback on improvements I can make to them.
DarkHeart
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Very well written, though I would've liked to have seen more description of the actual growth than anything off the screen. Also, please, please, don't put black text on a yellow background anymore, it's extremely painful on the eyes.
The Toymaker
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
I liked it. Not as good as "Summertime at the Dairy", but very enjoyable. A number of grammatical errors, but otherwise lotsa fun. "Lap-fillingly large" is a great goal. I'm going to go and download some other stories, keep up the good work.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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