The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

BookMasterJ
B.U.G.S redone
The thanks go to all who gave to this wonderful story; I just cleaned up a few things and made it into a novel.  And added things of my own.  Enjoy!
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 Why Ate Urp
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3 
Nice revision, also nice to see some original ideas for a story for a change.
 DarkHeart
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3 
Not a bad re-write, but it would've been nice to have more of a real ending.
 Grayface
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
I liked it a lot. WTG!
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