breedyouhuge@yahoo.com
He learns an after-hours secret about a pretty coworker.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.47
- BE: 4.47
- Characters: 3.71
- Technical: 4.53
cantstopthis
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
milker2006
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Got to the point and awesome
tee
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
a damn good read. make like it
MYC
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
fantastic. looking forward to the next part.
Bob
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 5
Can't Wait for the next instalment.
deux_anges
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
I can't wait for the next installment either!
The characters are a little shallow, but I'm sure more will be revealed (pun intended!) in the next part. The technical quality is otherwise excellent.
MrNuclear
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
The headline for the story needs to be worked on for next time, but the writing is excellent.
basil_jelly
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Well done and intriguing. I certainly want more!
DarkHeart
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Well written, the BE had good detail, but the rest seemed to be lacking. Certainly wouldn't finding out what caused the change.
Benji Dude
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
A great story, brillent BE scene give us all the next part.
Big Peter
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Daunte
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Good style! Not much character development, but that obviously wasn't the point of this installment. Hope to see the continuation soon.
fun!
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Bateman
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
A fun ROMP. Not like it's an epic novel, but it is definitely a keeper. Can hardly wait for the next one.
Dave
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I liked it very much. I hope, like the others above, for a sequel. A
Kanodin
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Exceptionally good word economy/selection. Looking forward to the rest of the story.
B-spider
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Would love to rean next part
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