The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Apoo
Touch the Sky
Alicia begins growing when she eats and works out.  but her growth has more to do with it than that...
Average Scores:

Neas
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Well it was ok I'd like to see more but try to describe the bust size even more than already had.

Joey
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

File needs to be formatted better to be even legible.

George Bush
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

It's a Microsoft Works File. Should have converted it to something more universal.

The Mann
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

Im workin on a story just like this, what should I do, I dont wanna step on anyones toes.

nickname
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

Isn't this an older story called "think mega"? I know I have read this before under a different author, but I don't remember who. Don't worry about having a similar story, especially if this is ripped-off. It's a great story, but I've seen it before.

Cmdr_Mark
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

Not the best story ever, but ok.

Bejabbers
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 1

Looks like the author was going for something a bit more spiritual...

WTF?
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

If your gonna rip somoeone's story off at least take their name off the title...

Vincent
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 2

I really enjoyed this. Well specifically the part where Alicia was benching and grew with every rep. I really like that type of growth. I read the original but it was about a woman getting fat...not my bag. Nice adaptation.

brit
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

I've always been a fan of big, tall and growing girls. I especially like it when the girl grows to huge yet within-the-realm-of-possiblity sizes, which is what most of this story was all about. Big kudos for that. Not the best BE persay, but great as a growth story (and a rare approach at that)

Benji Dude
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 2

Not a bad story but not a great one either, some gramma mistakes let it down, along with the writer getting carried away at the end.

The Toymaker
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 2

For awhile, I couldn't even find the story to rate it, 'casue apparently it was written by someone else(?) It was interesting, a bit of a downer at the end because the chracters DIE, and frankly I almost felt a little guilty for enjoying it.

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