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In a desperate effort to conceive, Claire and David try an experimental drug that brings out the animal in both of them.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.71
- BE: 4.14
- Characters: 4.07
- Technical: 4.50
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Paradox
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Marie
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Just the most amazing story ever!!!!!! So raw and hot!!
Laramie
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Ethan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
The best I've seen in a long while.
G-man
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Very interesting twist, enjoyed please keep writing
Riv
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
A little light on the whole build-up to the BE scene, but I suppose it's whatever gets you going.
DarkHeart
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
The BE could've been a bit more, but overall that was one very hot story. Please write some more. :)
Grey Deth
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Wow! Excellent story and characters. I really liked the deep bond they shared and how the drug took over their body. It almost seemed like the physical, so primal, brought them closer together. Your description of the process of change wasn't overly detailed but definitley put you into the story. I really enjoyed it and hope their will be more!
yosemite
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
I agree this is the best new story in a while. I'd strongly urge this author to keep it up, while paying heed to those commentators who noted the buildup and the BE could have been better. The only real flaw to me was the ending, which was neither funny nor sexy; but it is hard to end these fantasies heaven knows. Lets have more from this promising new author.
RudeyPunk
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is a very well written, supercharged erotic story. Keep up the good work. It would have been interesting if the Man had lost as much contorl over is "humanity" as his wife did. Overall a very enjoyable, erotic story.
djkoushoku
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very, very well written. A grand surprise. Full of energy. I'm looking forward to your next story!
D
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
I like them a bit more descriptive but very well done!
moord
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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