Jim breaks up with his girlfreind, and then meets Cassandra almost immediately, who turns out to be far more than he anticipated!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 4.80
- Characters: 3.60
- Technical: 3.80
BigElChupacabra
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
It is the best story that i have ever read. short, sweet, very nice writing style, very easy to get into. just over all greatness, would love to read anything more (including a sequel, even though not really needed)
shadey
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
this story was/is the greatest one in all overflowingbra. you really need to make a sequal.
you rock,
shadey.
M-Cubed
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Good story, not all that much to it besides the BE - but it was well done, very nice sequence. Like a 'Scene'-style story that just kept going. If this is continued, I can imagine the characters will get more development, so I hope it is.
Grey Deth
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Short but sweet! You definitely got the BE description down but would have liked more character development. For being a short story it was very good. Thanks for writing.
rudeypunk
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Great little story. It didn't take much to get me wrapped into th story though. Great writing. I want to know what happens next day!
benji dude
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Nice little story, needed a bit more character development though. Maybe in the next part?
The Jigsaw Man
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
Wonderful story! The grammer and punctuation could be polished, but I saw no need for character development. It's just a short, right? But when you write the next one....
deux_anges
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Good BE description and just the right pace
MaxBigfoot
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
It strikes me as only the first part of a larger story. I'm hoping you continue this, and hope you include some nice sex scenes. Thanks for a nice short. :)
andrat2000
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Keep on growing Cassy!!! Hopefully it will be continued.
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