This is my first attempt at writing an erotic story.Wish me luck.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.08
- BE: 2.50
- Characters: 3.00
- Technical: 3.67
prof
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Duo
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Good for a first don't give up on your writeing I think another story would be cool.
cmdr_mark
Overall= 3, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
the incest was a surprise, and there wasn't much plot to be had.
coal
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
Good simple story. Right to the point.
Jakers
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
Not really into horny mothers who rape their sons. Although if the author had expanded on the backstory, it might be a more interesting read.
Breeze
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Excellent story. Very erotic. For a first effort, great job. Would like to see more.
Farscaper
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 4
Good first attempt but you need to have some BE in there to keep the atention of those of us who don't like incest.
bill
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
BateMan
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
I think that the author has talent, although the storyline is not among my favorites. Keep writing.
Zipper
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
This writer has potential, though the storyline didn't feature any BE,.
jat470
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I enjoy your writing style alot, I just wished you could have fleshed the story out a bit more. I look foward to your next submission. I liked the way you described the characters, the mother especially.
quit while you're ahead
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
I would strongly encourage you to pursue a career in something that doesn't involve written communication or contact with children.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
Due to comment spam, any new posts with http in them will be destroyed.
