The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

L.O. Bomber
Unknown
Blue Flame
Magical wishing in the dark leads two sisters into sex and transformations.
Average Scores:

BEMARV
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

!!!

Sigley89
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

You need to write more stories

Bobbsman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Best story ever. PERIOD

big dog
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

sweet

DarkHeart
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Very well written story, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Would like to see more of the same.

Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

A very good story with good characters and detail to match.

farscaper
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

It's a little long but it sure provides enjoyment. Best Story EVER

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