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The Overflowing Bra

Benji Dude
Master PC the program diary part 0
A prequal to part 1, This really explains how Grace got Master PC & what she did with it, it also answers a few other questions you may have, again both *.doc & *.txt are included.
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 Joe375
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3 
"10 megs! That's gonna take a while to download!"
Oh 2003.
 LilBryan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 3 
I truely enjoyed this story, as well as the multiple types of strange transformations. The characters could of been done better, seeming slightly shallow, but over all it is quite enjoyable.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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