The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Steve Palmer
Unknown
Blind Date
A guy meets a girl with beachball sized boobs that grow bigger and bigger as the story continues
Average Scores:

cutedaddy
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

The storytelling is great, great great!! The drawings actually diminish the fun, because they are poor and also hinder reader's fantasy.

Chocolatier
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Although Paul Forrest his soul, did the best work on the picures, it never ceases to amaze me how an author of big boob stories can focus on something other tha the BE. Steve Palmer is a genius, and this is my favorite story of his!

anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

a work of art

Keni Psychosis
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This is a masterpiece. Erotic, but also well written. That's rare nowadays. Good pictures, too.

dhertz64
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This has always been my favorite story. Most of the time, there is something lacking from a story of our genre, but not here. I heard about Paul Forrest, and it's really a shame. He was very talented. I hope you find a partner someday who can equal his work, and write more illustrated (not morphed) stores.

ThreePointOneFour
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I downloaded this story quite some time ago, and it's one of the ones I keep coming back to. The storytelling is well-paced, the characters nicely fleshed out (ahem) and completely believable. I would be hard-pressed to find an author as consistently good; this and "Nursing Bra" rank as two of my all-time favorites. This is the kind of writing I hope to equal some day.

Eldar
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Interesting, but repetitiv!

BIGboss
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5


To Steve Palmer:
Can you give me your email so if i get any ideas i can send them to you.

Toymaker
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Excellent. That about sums it up. The many illustrations alone are great (an awesome part of a lasting body of work); the story just ties it all together, with room for more.

Bravo.

BIGboss
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

The best story i ever read. Please upload more.

Metatron
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

words fail to the quality of this work

boobcrazed man
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Wow!!! Excelent story! I just wish there were a little more details describing the evolution of their relationship as well as the sex like in the other stories of this wonderful writer!!!
keep writing steve! you're awesome!!!!!

Goofy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Top Notch

Veryfree
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

One of the best stories of this genre I've read. Well worth the time and effort.

puzzler
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

fantastic

Hargle
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Very, very, VERY well done. Good illustrations, great descriptions, and the characters were superb. I hope to see more from you soon!

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

You are the new master!!!
I love when we girls are in charge. I mean when it's our idea to grow. Wonderful imagination. email me anytime
eat2eat@hotmail.com

Arbitrary Point
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Nice.

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.

IceOwl
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Wow indeed. I've always really liked Steve Palmer's drawings, but a story to go with them is something else entirely.

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

The storry is good, and those illustrations really blow this guy over the top!

andrat2000
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

An excellent story with equally superb drawings by the famous Steve Palmer. Definately a worth-while read.

BakaMan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I liked the pictures. Who knows what could happen next!

jat470
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This and Voyeur Voyager are my personal favorites of yours. Paul Forrest will certainly be missed, but I still look foward to future projects. Keep it up!

lynxx21
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I've always liked your work, and you still aim to please. Fantastic work as usual.

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