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Kelly finds a book of spells at a second hand book store. With interest she finds it relatively easy to cast spells but so does her sister Ruth
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.20
- BE: 4.40
- Characters: 4.20
- Technical: 4.20
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Very well done! Creative, fresh, and enjoyable. Just a little too short.... :)
Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.
Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Quite a good story that was well written, but it came off as a bit short.
benji dude
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
A few grammar mistakes brought the technical mark down but a good story overall a bit short mind, maybe a sequal is in order?
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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