I started to write this for the BEArchive story contest but I never completed it. It is about a girl on her 18th birthday where everything she says becomes true. Please feel free to continue the story.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 4.50
I
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Somewhat confusing at times and just wish someone would add to it
man
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
i luved it to bad its not continued
me
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I liked it a lot, I hope someone continues this story.
Pringlesman
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
very nice story, the writing is semi-confusing at times but otherwise ncie, it would be nice to see how it ends.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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