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The Overflowing Bra

TooBigisTooSmall
Voodoos and VooDONTs: CHAPTER 3
Undeterred, Tess is ready to take another crack at voodoo, while Dani begins to appreciate her unexpected changes, and the attention that comes with it...
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Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
This took an interesting plot twist, which I didn't see coming.
Equally enjoyable as the previous one.

My only gripe so far is with the visual changes that could be more descriptive in quantity and quality.

Other than that, I'm curious what chapter 4 will bring. 
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