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The Overflowing Bra

RaoulDuke
Twisted Diary
Arguably the sickest, most twisted piece of BE fiction there is.
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Matt
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Wow...That really was sick and disturbing. At least I was warned. You did a good job adjusting the writing style: Vocabulary, punctuation, etc., as the girls fell deeper into the drugs' effects. I'm guessing this was influenced largely by "Flowers for Algernon" ? It was a well written story, but just too depressing to be enjoyable.

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