A Corinne Meadowlark story. Some thiry years in our future, Cee, intrepid reporter for the Tecumseh Trumpet, is assigned to interview the famous DNA genomorphing genius, Dr. Anne Corben for a feature article. The results are profoundly disturbing.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.30
- BE: 3.10
- Characters: 3.60
- Technical: 4.00
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Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Not bad post, but a lot of extra !!...
Wayne Boich
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
4voe76 I decided to help and sent a post to the social bookmarks. I hope to raise it in popularity!!...
werenotgonnamakeit
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
I can't wait for the sequel to this. Specifically, I want more Corinne-Anne action, because that's hot (it's like Janeway/7/Borg Queen femmeslash). And you can actually write too!! The only technical issue that you have is that you shouldn't use different names for characters within the same paragraph. God created pronouns for a reason. The biggest thing, however, is that the characters are difficult to visualize.
Silus
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Very good story. The characters are well done and have believable personalities. After reading for a while, the sex scenes became less important to me than the plot and imaginative transformations. Well done!
MrHHH
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Very light on the BE. The problem is that I couldn't get into the story. The characters are just too strange to imagine, and each one is wildly different.
Anonymous
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
While very well written, and extremely well-detailed, I found myself waiting far too long for any action. Description of the dracocentaurs got repetitive after a while, and it was often hard to follow who was who, and what they were supposed to look like. A shorter, more punchy story set in this universe would've been much better, IMO.
Anonymous
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 2
A real snorefest - read at your own peril.
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Exactly what the devouring reader wants: lots of story and description. The thinking man and woman's BE. A little spooky.
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Good story. Can't wait for the sequel.
Evil Eye
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
The writing is unusually good for a BE story, but the actual story is a flop- While I did find the story interesting (well, what small fraction of it I could grasp), understanding was at a bare minimum. The charachters were- Dare I say it?- Too weird. Far too weird to envision, and thusly a little hard to relate to. Something a titch less wordy, with somewhat more "normal" forms (Not NORMAL, but... More normal than this...) would work. Such a story could do with some more action, because this story was sadly light on it. I hate penalizing someone for vision and scope, but here, it sadly didn't work. Still, please, try again. The BE fiction world is nearly devoid of people like you, who can write well...
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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