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The Overflowing Bra

Blake Isaac Gordon
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Prisoner of thy own Accord part II
The final chapter and conclusion to this story. Dan struggles back to consciousness only to find...he's chained up. Downloaded story into two formats... Enjoy
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MrHHH
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Cool idea. The stuff that goes on in BE stories would be world changing if it happened in the real world. It was a little short, and even thought the focus was on the characters, I would of liked to see more BE. After all, there were several dozen men there!

Leviathan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

This is a great story, one of the best BE stories ever written. I know that's a high claim, but I think it is true. My favorite parts of the story was where Robin torments Dan and smothers him with her breasts. I also liked the scene where Robin is rubbing her breasts without thinking about it, and the part where Freya has a talk with Robin and she gets mad. Those are all great and classic scenes. Just awesome. :)

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.

Prophet Tenebrae
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

It was a good story and two formats was nice - although that HTML needs a bit of work, the indented speech, eugh.

I think this was a classic fem-dom story but while it did a lot - I couldn't help but feel that it was something of an aside to the first chapter and I would certainly hope that you don't waste this story universe - although a direct sequel wouldn't be the obvious thing to do.

I suppose I just felt that really, it was a bit short and that things which you hinted at could have been elaborated on - but otherwise an enjoyable effort and the best story for months.

Kanodin
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4

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Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.

Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

It's okay

Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

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Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

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