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The Overflowing Bra

Kowalski
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FIRST, LAST, ALWAYS
Boring well-to-do middle aged couple try a new birth control pill and a new depression medication. Life is never the same again.
Average Scores:

BB47
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Hot!!  Wife turns into a permanent age regressed bimbo.  Dude gets saddled with a monstercock.  
MrHHH
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Love the Theme of your universe Kowalski. It's good to see that you're still creating new stories.

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

GREAT.

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

kowalski roolz

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Long one... but that's a good thing in this case.

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

glad to see kowalski back at it

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

More character development than usual in the genre makes the story believable, yet it works as an erotic fantasy. it is on the long side, but that did not bother me a bit.

Prophet Tenebrae
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

This story really didn't do anything for me and I think the entire reason for that was the way it started - the last thing I want when I read a BE story is to have lots of real issues and miscarriage is a pretty serious real life thing. So I'm sure you can understand how this sort of thing really spoiled - no, ruined - any enjoyment I might have gleaned from this story.

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I'm too lazy.

Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

nice

Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

wow

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