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The Overflowing Bra

Hunter S. Creek
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The Little Baby Sitter
Circumstances bring JoeL together again with Beth, the former baby sitter for his son.  Beth has undergone some big changes since they had last seen each other.  He soon discovers that Beth is still growing and is more than willing to share her experience with her former boss.
Average Scores:

Brit
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

A very memorable tale.

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.

MrHHH
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Not much BE in it, but I love the agressive woman character.

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Cool!

Prophet Tenebrae
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Ah, Hunter S. Creek stories are always good and while this one shies away from the normal "magical" growth and opts for a more realistic option and hence you can't help but thinking that maybe this could happen to you :)

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Cool

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