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The Overflowing Bra

Dragon6860
dragon6860@yahoo.com
Beanna Saga, Chapter 2
After returning to her town, Isis uses her new breast powers to get revenge on all of the people who made fun of her for being flat chested. 
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Dreginy
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Not as good as the first part, but still decent. Could've had bigger growth.

Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 2

Bad spelling aside, a very good story.

Anonymous
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 1

I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.

TAlon
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Nice job! Very good sequel.

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