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The Overflowing Bra

Dragon6860
dragon6860@yahoo.com
A Night At The Warehouse
When Keely and Elisha have a accident at the chemical wherehouse where they work, they find that they can do all sorts of things with their bodies.
Average Scores:

DarkIvory
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Very good, good charates, very lifelike.

The Hodrod
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3

Few grammer errors held the only downfall to the story. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you

Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.

Talon
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3

Very good story. Nice descriptions, and good characters.

Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3

I enjoyed this story. Characters were likeable, detail was above par overall and generally well written work.

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