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Shannon reads instructions in an old book on how to alter her body and soon finds herself much curvier.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.00
- BE: 1.00
- Characters: 3.00
- Technical: 3.00
Benji Dude
Overall= 3, BE= 1, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Very average story but it's got a nice premise to it. Needs more discription of the lead characters changes, also needs the next part but it might be worth going back over this part first just to "flesh" out the transformations.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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