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The Overflowing Bra

Wren and Corinne Meadowlarke
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Wish
Cynthia, a short and busty girl, wants to be taller. When the school freak, Patricia, offers her a chance to get her wish, she takes it. But the wish backfires.  
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Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Impossible to download nowcouldn't read
Billy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great
Ninja In The Night
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Very good, moralisitc yet deliciously evil with a hint of you reap what you sow at the end of the story.

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