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The Overflowing Bra

XXXecil
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Lustwave A.S.S. part 5 (Illustrated!)
"And what are we to tell the local authorities? Do we tell them that one hundred sex-starved, nymphomaniac, demon sluts have escaped?" It gets worse. Only by downloading this story will you discover the true erotic powers of the Daughters of Lilith. Pregnant demons and uncontrollable sexual urges bedevil the Agents! (It's not really as big as it looks: That's just the illustration I put in.)
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321
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Good storyline but now I am worried
The demons now have the ability to breed, thus mankind would be overrun at any moment
Could Mankind have a chance to strike back?
Because for me, I would write mankind as the winners
But it is up to you

anonymous
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 2

one crappy drawing doesn't mean that you can claim it's illustrated

iamthedave
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 3

I suppose in general it isn't very good, but it is so silly and fun that I think it well deserves reading.

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