happyguyprime@yahoo.com
Why in the world would anyone need a ray to make a woman smaller? You wouldn't believe me if I told you.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 4.00
Doc
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Everything that a BE story should have was in this story. There were a few grammatical and spelling errors, although the story quality is so friggin amazing that it overshadows all of 'em.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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