TheClause2007@yahoo.com
Werewolves turn normal people into werewolves by biting them. Weresults use...other methods.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 2.00
- BE: 2.50
- Characters: 2.50
- Technical: 1.00
Demaiter
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 1
coder4freecode
Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 1
It's generally a really bad sign when the author cannot spell the name of the story correctly. It goes downhill from there. I believe this is the first story I've ever skimmed that used cigar smoke as an erotic device. The story is also poorly named, as there appears to be no reverse transformation - werecreatures all change into their alternate forms by the light of the full moon, but are "normal" the rest of the time (except for being extra tough.)
The story had great potential just on the name, but it failed to achieve it.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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