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The Overflowing Bra

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A fucked up Dream
Told from the first person view as one would relate a story to a group of friends. It follows our protagonist Alan after a night of partying to his home with his new friend Brittany. He falls asleep, only to 'wake up' dreaming an odd dream.
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Acank
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 2

Great post however I was watinng to know if you could write a litte more on this subject? I'd be very thankful if you could elaborate a little bit more. Many thanks!

Q
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Excellent!

Malignus
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

The BEST one here!

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