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The Overflowing Bra

Strider
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Amanda
Duke convinces Amanda to try some cutting edge nanotech. 
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tsokei
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 1, Technical= 3

The word bigger is written 3 times, all on page 3; highlight of the story. Read it if you haven't read this author's style before.

Brit
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 3

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