The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Cheviot
cheviot@cheviotsplace.com
Breast of Times, Worst of Times
When a young woman decides to exact revenge on her tormenting classmate she gets more than she bargained for.... much more...
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Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Amazing story! I love the concept of a girl struggling with her development in this way, especially as though it's "normal" for her during her changes.

Would love to see (would be almost willing to pay) more of this from any author!

Genoharden
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Bravo! A triumph! Very underrated. There's nothing to complain about and believe me, I've tried. Bravo!

bier
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great, great, great. Addicted? Of course!

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