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The Overflowing Bra

Randy
Unknown
Become One With Me 2
Sue's attempt to try out her new cock with a threesome backfires.
Average Scores:
 Chris Yohn
Overall= 3, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 5 
WARNING BLOOD!!
Well written, just not my thing. A quick read. No BE
 prettybelinda
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4 
Made me hard! Perhaps the cock was slightly bigger than it needed to be. Women love girth but over a certain length it's just going to be uncomfortable. Cunts aren't arses!
 3pyon
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Very Good Downloaded it back in 01
Just 1 notch below the first one
 old shmoe
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
nympho prinkazon with big tits? cool!
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