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Julie's got a problem -- her boyfriend doesn't think she's sexy enough. Lucky for her she works in a lab which is extracting the essence of lust from people.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.67
- BE: 4.67
- Characters: 4.33
- Technical: 4.67
BB47
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Big_One_12
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story, the characters had some depth and there was more to the plot than "Gee, 'x' body part just got bigger, I should screw now." Not that there's anything wrong with that, mind you, but still. I wouldn't mind seeing more MPG stories from this author in the future.
HorseRadish
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Some slightly confusing characters.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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