A woman has a huge secret that she's ashamed of ( actually, two increasingly large secrets), but meets a guy who doesn't seem to mind so much!
(HUGE breasts ahead! This is an upload of an old story from Ryver8's DeviantArt page. All 5 parts, and two artpieces are included)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.67
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
Matt
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
neverbigenough
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
My favorite story from my favorite BE author! Expect lots of growth
SYDRTY
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Ryver has a talent for writing overlybloated expansion stories. However, I like this one because of how direct it actually is. Past stories like Samantha's Colossal Bust, while impressive pagewise, really can be a slog to read through. This one is concise, has a constant motion behind it, and has solid, mostly believable characters within it. Definitely one of his best to date.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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