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The Overflowing Bra

Saint Limey
The Blessed Isles Chapters (7-9)
An ostracized Island Princess takes foreigners to a forbidden, sacrificial space. Our protagonists receive the offer of a lifetime. Holy scriptures change hearts and cup sizes. Part of an ongoing series.
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cman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very exiting story.  Well written and fun   For those interested, chapters through 11 are on DeviantArt.
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