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The Overflowing Bra

Madam Materia
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Welcome to Madam Materia's Magical Menagerie. A woman trapped in a man's body wanders into our midst this fine evening, seeking the power to release her inner self to the world. However is such a world ready who they really are?
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Overall= 3, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Great story up until the overdose at the end  would have appreciated a description of exactly what the overdose did and the repercussions. Unfortunately the abrupt ending was very unsatisfying. I would have also been nice to see her share the vials with her friends, especially if they had fursonas with more sexual forms.
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