A short episode of two sisters who find a magical wish-granting genie. Is she what she appears to be? Did they really mean to wish for that?
Future chapters will include sexy times but you may have to make do with rampant transformation on offer here.
Includes illustrations by Spurcell.
This is my first ever story so feedback would be highly appreciated!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 2.00
- Technical: 4.00
SoylentOrange
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
I thought the character dynamic of jerk, idiot, and sane protagonist was a little trite, even if the idiot role was forced upon the sister. The low BE score is more the fault of the site for being so specific than any real deficiency on your part though it's true there isn't a lot of BE and it's not gone into in great detail, it's supplanted by all the other growths and TFs I thoroughly enjoyed. Were the criteria Expansionstransformations it would have gotten 4 easy, maybe 5.
Overall though, it's a really neat story and I'd love to see it continued. Shame that Spurcell is MIA, these were some really great pics, too.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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