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mysteryguy9215 and CRUBAT
Roommates: Alternate Universe
A series of stories culminating in one long novella, based on the characters of Roommates, a concept originally conceived by 99Breaker and CRUBAT. It was five years in the making. Enjoy.
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Usiondoe maoni
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
Poorly scribed, unnatural flow with unlikeable and uninteresting characters.
Chuck
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very well written and a lot of thought put into the wording, structure, etc. Definitely a good story for growth fans!
Guest
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Odt is awkward and uncommon especially on phones consider uploading it as docx pdf or html
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